Essay Whinging

[localfreak]

I made a notes-and-essay nest on my brand new floor. Unfortunately, much later, I still am not happy with my redraft and there's at least two examples (the prevalance of cultural understanding around the term '9/11' despite the fact that, for example in the UK, we would call things '11/9' - and if I can fit it the way that 7/7 just hasn't caught on in the same way, as evidenced in the film We Bought A Zoo in which they decided that was the Great Date for an opening, wheras if they'd decided on 11th September that would have undoubtedly been vetoed as culturally insensitive and also the recent stories about the girl who got shot for going to school etc) and I NEED to put something of them in, I need to because otherwise the essay is LACKING FUNDAMENTALLY.

Brain is cabbaging so will have to return to this ball-ache after my tea. I have to be nearly done after today because I'm meeting friends tomorrow and need to NOT be an essay-panic-deadline bore!